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Justin H's avatar

I like the use of language throughout the poem—it's expressive and led me throughout.

I thought it was interesting to read together every last verse from each part.

For it all seemed to go together even more so at least that's what I gathered.

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Alexaander's avatar

I wasn't sure about it reading it first thing in the morning but now that I've woken up I do enjoy the story telling aspect. You have the bit with his suicide and then the personal story of discovering him.

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